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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown. K# |. P3 j, |% M) y
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5 e2 k, P' B0 A7 y$ F" q8 pIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5 P2 g1 U$ q% v$ ^9 ]/ q

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?& e; l6 C5 z2 h( E
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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& z' n7 t, v" p* G3 A% M5 C1 ~& n公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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& p: i; q& t1 y8 Q1 {) y" e5.39.217.77:8898Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.77:8898- n/ w$ i. i; y& T2 ~
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇, ^  W& k% K! I- E) m4 O
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul& K3 x) i# k3 t9 Z6 q
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4 m% ~2 z8 K& k1 d" P5.39.217.77:8898If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 q, G3 g6 ~, N( B  J. u) p
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。$ c: N) R/ T' T. D) L& J6 R
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb* B7 C. z' F1 w. r7 m

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