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A Path Less Traveled
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: e0 N, J/ p4 L, qtvb now,tvbnow,bttvbI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.77:8898: z# b/ D, w$ u- h6 {

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" l  z2 l# H+ ptvb now,tvbnow,bttvbWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.77:8898- P! ~5 }) R/ K! E' V
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7 w- h9 E3 Z/ U9 h$ ]And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.77:8898- Q# j1 c' g' Y+ g1 t6 Q6 L2 ?" B

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb: U, h! }+ V1 U% d8 m: t, ~# Z
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1 J+ n# e1 V  i* k, H' `公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 5.39.217.77:8898) B+ A1 b4 |" ?1 G2 N% l7 I4 C5 B
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇6 O& w2 [, P! M/ r  O2 R

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A Path Less Traveled( \- I  T" `4 q

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+ \/ |- f. s( n2 e( N! `公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77:8898: K! T& M' i( n. T$ x

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...! Y2 Y3 m, |4 p' A
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。1 e( r% ]2 V7 V, p

+ O6 S5 ^- x4 x5.39.217.77:8898If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇( {$ F5 n1 `, _: y$ c
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