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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you: m9 f% a1 @/ X8 Q% B2 k/ V
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! @+ }3 Z9 o1 y$ Q  pAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...6 p% t& i* r" U2 C8 o

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?公仔箱論壇/ f& P1 A$ b0 M3 D+ B

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb( S3 F# w7 X6 t1 a4 w# S* O
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul" Y' f2 |, M" u

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  ~  f9 j) J9 U& R3 y3 E5.39.217.77:8898If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇# E- n2 f+ s# K3 H9 j
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.77:88982 z! O( E+ [' Y

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3 ~, O. U6 W' k8 e公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5 Q! J* h! L( w! R
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。! v8 y) M% W4 |/ p

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