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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soulTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。9 B+ r4 E( K+ Y' }( G5 \0 g

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter..., _) c6 S+ R: @2 |. x

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇; L6 c% s9 \- M  [8 b

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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.77:88986 C8 W  J1 l3 T' ]# R/ E' v/ m, K. t
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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