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A Path Less Traveled
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' Q3 q+ q, ?% I$ R+ T$ yI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown: Q9 S3 ~  c# @3 E7 L

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇* W3 d$ I: ?" M. D6 ]
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.77:8898! X  u9 M+ @  P: j
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.77:88985 ~6 D: X. {  R5 c6 Z

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.77:8898! q7 b' |6 O2 _: A7 B& V. q# ^8 J

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, j# k) V; X% O. Atvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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: ]& f  H: V, G6 l. h3 }5.39.217.77:8898If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown" q2 ?! ?: M0 x" t3 x6 j* s4 B

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' v) h) u$ p* g& ltvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇- K1 M/ E5 p7 J$ u2 X" N: O  Y

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。$ t8 f8 V6 X/ `6 F8 r' R" D
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