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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb' Y" ~9 P( E; _4 y4 D* T

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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: z1 C+ i0 U$ g" g& Otvb now,tvbnow,bttvbAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇0 G  D3 |" V$ f: v* v! {8 t3 k& e

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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77:8898$ r" y; s+ H; ~1 X& L" H- G

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 n8 J4 Y8 s: ]
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..) `4 O( F) y0 o/ s- E' }
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 5.39.217.77:8898! V# T2 S, }8 n3 X  l; U& u" R

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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