追生梦死 zhui sheng meng si
， 描述： Give me some opinion. .. coz i wrote this poem just 2 minutes
追风捕影乐其中，
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生命虚渡醉一生！
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梦里寻追命始终，
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死后冷笑悔憾声！5.39.217.77:8898; V" w3 [5 c( F9 m& C2 _. w4 r4 O
si hou leng xiao hui han sheng |
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