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A Path Less Traveled
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" C6 Z2 d- p! |# Q2 z5 _: b1 b+ TI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown6 l( L( G6 O2 c

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9 a. O# T/ A; |Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb% V- q  x- |: d

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- z* H  O- |# H+ \1 gtvb now,tvbnow,bttvbAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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6 A& J) C1 Q, K  x7 E# }# FIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb1 O9 |4 [3 v$ G/ E* `7 E- q9 W
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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb; y7 k- E$ D$ ?& x1 I

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇; c6 C. r7 P8 b! b

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