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A Path Less Traveled
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1 Q5 p; X* _' Y& x; Y! N& SChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.77:8898  Q4 n: @: d% m6 ]1 Z1 i

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇7 K( {  `( {% W9 I  G# K
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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1 Q- b. s* C, a$ h公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.77:8898+ y, \! ^/ Q& v( b

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" h% u$ \$ m5 h4 x0 K8 |5.39.217.77:8898I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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3 ~0 m$ A+ P3 h* UChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul. [9 j6 N+ e- d0 D4 G' h

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+ f* P$ I' y$ sIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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