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A Path Less Traveled
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/ A; `$ `9 R5 M9 stvb now,tvbnow,bttvbI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown4 y2 q/ }; \+ g$ s! a7 x. U  P1 Z1 `
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/ E) ?+ P# y3 E3 K. [/ \- n公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul4 E6 w( v! ~: [$ i( D3 n% M

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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( b- U% E7 j; U( U1 h公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.* B5 G* U' K1 x1 c5 F

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