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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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! G  o% T4 L- ltvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。+ ]  r7 S, d# M1 _

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇0 O; V9 `3 F! \2 l. c7 b$ l
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A Path Less Traveledtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 @3 s' o5 \1 \  p" F

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..! K" q! E) E9 W0 d6 S) {

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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