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( @! K5 q8 N/ AChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul+ A" c" o% o6 s' V& s: h
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?公仔箱論壇2 a0 d0 s2 F1 A( \7 X+ Y$ X
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+ g/ A# Y5 V8 M- p) zAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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3 ^4 v% N; d4 F( I" Q5.39.217.77:8898Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇9 G% d7 L+ d3 d1 i+ j% Z& C1 G
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) l. y6 j: V( H4 ~% u5.39.217.77:8898Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you: X% h$ ?' I! ~/ R
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。& O# x' g8 }1 m6 H- q8 B

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