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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77:8898" ^0 q/ a/ X$ G; A

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..6 Z3 l8 _$ X* i" s& M

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* V( c4 z) p3 }# AAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb  a2 C, P9 m# H4 u8 J8 Z" Z6 u5 s2 @
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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