追生梦死 zhui sheng meng si
， 描述： Give me some opinion. .. coz i wrote this poem just 2 minutes
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生命虚渡醉一生！
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梦里寻追命始终，
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死后冷笑悔憾声！
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發表於 2008-9-1 02:25 PM
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