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A poem - 請多多指教

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9 \# Q, t/ A3 c$ tI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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8 L+ ]* y2 @( w4 C3 j5.39.217.77:8898Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.77:88983 E) A& m. ~+ V  @
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb' H+ O/ G: L0 A

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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2 Q/ ]8 a: K3 ^6 x8 t; wIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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3 |! |/ O# E" ?& A! u6 {$ fWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。& j0 Z! J2 W" E" n3 p9 F

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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveledtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb8 t6 e' Y# d7 F" i& V. E/ b
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9 ?! f* v' s2 p# \I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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! M6 ^, m! }$ q+ CChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5 b. t6 a0 L) {, M+ b# _
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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4 S/ V' G+ y6 G6 u8 {: g6 |If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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& u7 j: M" @! {) @0 B' d6 s7 @And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.77:8898  H' x) O8 ]0 Q% S. s" U' I, K

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2 i, Y& L5 {4 Y7 H" n- `; N9 mIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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& p) |, T5 t* w* o5.39.217.77:8898If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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