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發表於 2010-11-1 08:58 AM | 只看該作者 ::: 一按馬上把這個話題放上你的facebook!! :::

A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled1 i6 _, n  ?; Q5 K3 J, E) W
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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  y# H5 n8 U+ M8 u3 Y; i5.39.217.77:8898Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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9 x0 V0 @: K% L" t% ?- n: F$ tIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you  w" g, R2 h8 c2 K) [
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( T- i" Z* l9 bIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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2 F9 V  H) @! J3 r( i) p: R公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..! t/ Y2 x6 i7 w: c* k5 v) B+ v, P

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9 J" m3 E$ K5 K( D9 a, N& v( `' p公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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0 \; {2 [# z* i: W7 N! F公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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3 C4 j  y8 y9 v1 p) b) K! ?5.39.217.77:8898Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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9 _( U3 k: n7 ^8 p! l+ e5.39.217.77:8898Ray of Light
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rayoflight48

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發表於 2010-11-1 01:16 PM | 只看該作者 ::: 一按馬上把這個話題放上你的facebook!! :::

RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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! r! \( d, _1 u" ?& LChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
! |7 W( ~" s; G+ l2 }- b4 R) Z) y公仔箱論壇
; {1 [4 A& j  P6 [TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。
$ J. D4 Q) i" A+ l9 \8 K4 @: R1 V% x2 Q$ btvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
3 F3 a4 R5 \) @TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。
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0 K3 F- f3 ?) t; ?; QIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。  c" Z. n) x% R: y
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# ], A  }" a1 Y* x; FWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?公仔箱論壇: T( U# r' X- O8 D2 }

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.8 G; ~( f0 Z3 I
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TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。2 \: ^( U% {/ L* A' X$ L
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