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A poem - 請多多指教

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9 G& l  A$ B* Z9 E5 S$ T公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77:8898* i4 z3 i& J8 ]* C- \, |
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.77:8898. g2 o9 p3 _: D( c' [" K! }$ r
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5 u' u* |" X, }9 B5 W* o公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 N2 V0 G5 }' R  |5 W: P3 z% p" \
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& M1 R; T% b8 N& ~; v公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb0 F4 e1 b6 l! T7 E1 z; d) q

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter.... `3 [/ e2 A: [) K
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5 N+ @! d; h* T) E5 y公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?6 \# x3 o$ R$ M5 g- C, o
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- v! |# `& r( GIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less TraveledTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。( j* Z, G9 ~. L7 \

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: S& ]; c$ a. e, ]/ o2 B公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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9 u" d2 _5 o! S$ a0 v* s- NIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb# J3 C+ a- c) H0 v* i
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* B/ ~" t3 _9 VIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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& c+ \2 ~3 c4 Q& F. p5.39.217.77:8898And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.77:88987 p8 ^9 [$ Q% G0 v- T$ \+ {) y* \
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。' U4 Q/ d" V, [
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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! a, r' E+ s4 f0 P2 I5.39.217.77:8898If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? / Z2 |* N( R/ q8 l# H! Q7 b9 w

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/ b3 S5 J+ {5 v3 w$ eWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 E1 o5 I6 H4 a/ I; ^
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