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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇# I' A/ R/ V* @5 ]! |5 E

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb1 T7 }2 A5 w6 V/ ]! T0 t+ O- D

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。( |' @3 Z! G; r# Q! `/ ~* ~& y% J

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb7 ]" w0 [4 I; Z

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb+ X0 N( l& o+ I& h" D
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, X7 I& R8 i. c% o+ V8 l公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇; ?7 j/ w* `% V( S- m2 a
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- e( q$ v# }9 H& \公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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Ray of Light
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknownTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。& ?; R; f2 @, M1 p) t! u5 x" y
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul- R0 Q: o3 w' X/ A0 \: p

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇" }: i( u/ T# ^% }% q
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& Q5 E% f' t  v4 H* Z# ?: x% O公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇2 A4 H- \6 F. q1 N0 E6 W1 y+ I
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?& t, r7 E' O. v( Q% y' d# T: y
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? $ A* V( Y2 ]! v( E

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