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A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 5.39.217.77:88984 n8 B1 b' a9 T: |8 p& |" J
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Ray of Light
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

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, I- N  Y, z. w( T1 Q公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you- C% C$ l9 A! ?! o5 C7 Y( q8 P4 A

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..) f0 r; Y( T; ]7 T7 @8 |( J
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇3 X6 V# L1 S/ Z- T) ^
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