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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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; e4 ~- e+ U; r3 ~What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇5 S) X# \5 Z. z6 `- `' U5 f- Y  Q9 q! w

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+ X) I8 r8 O& s8 P7 |7 q+ K; ]6 o; qIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Ray of Light
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。; x' ~, i# H. b
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  A9 y2 q) r$ B0 b8 [9 a% i+ W3 ?) U$ y& @5.39.217.77:8898If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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3 [' T( D/ M) c3 n& d0 }7 J1 uAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...2 A" k  W; ]% F# n$ C* ~9 G- l

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+ g% e/ s; p0 q0 D6 Ttvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?" G+ C( E( B: S  q5 F6 e/ @
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& X9 G# C4 h0 P: @( @1 K+ gIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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2 y8 u& f0 N7 A6 w( \Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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