追生梦死 zhui sheng meng si
， 描述： Give me some opinion. .. coz i wrote this poem just 2 minutes
追风捕影乐其中，公仔箱論壇, t' s# y. X n# O$ S) w! p) K
zhui feng bu ying le qi zhong
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sheng ming xu du zui yi sheng
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死后冷笑悔憾声！公仔箱論壇- ~$ @( v& O9 w, O# v
si hou leng xiao hui han sheng |
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