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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 e% x6 Q$ j- |0 s* c; [2 `2 i: j

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.779 P$ ]$ a4 m, A& S
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.5.39.217.775 J- c. ^. k* G: s) p/ b
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A Path Less Traveled
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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! }' K) [  g9 Y4 R6 d5.39.217.77If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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