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A poem - 請多多指教

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3 F9 D) m0 L9 ~公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown  C) x7 U; X* k% I' Z: {6 u& d3 l

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& R9 O; J/ C1 ]tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul9 b# {6 l: Y" Y/ z7 x# D

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: z3 i/ b4 H6 p5.39.217.77If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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, t3 k/ b) `3 Q. c  n公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?9 ~+ R0 z8 V6 V6 U

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, ~( w; b0 w7 J. D3 B5.39.217.77What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..$ T( o/ j; d! \. P1 e
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?1 F: |9 P' G2 I- n- k0 @5 h

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2 h6 Q, k. {% Z1 i1 P: F" jWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest./ |6 j( g% X4 Y0 X( Z1 K! D

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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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( F3 I7 h7 o1 K% f5.39.217.77I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown( r% q; A, f$ D9 {: f0 f: u
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' v- Q& G7 r. _: zChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb- Z/ Y, E4 u/ H( F" v) G

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6 P* w8 d7 L+ u: y5.39.217.77If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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' E- p6 U$ v5 i* t( R5.39.217.77What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb7 s  y6 f8 [" X
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* ]) v6 E3 A* }: d8 w) w9 \TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? ) u" ^4 s% E1 k; P1 h$ R' {1 L
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$ S" b! v: \, i+ F7 b( f公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。3 W3 F3 m6 \# h9 K
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