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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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9 J# d) H6 _( j+ K5.39.217.77Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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9 p0 U4 y6 R6 W, O8 uIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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) z. v, ^3 h$ m5 P5.39.217.77Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇  @- e/ _! P* N1 h9 ~9 j

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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; H: N' E! P/ g! [! V/ Q3 {# ]公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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. a. M$ ^, n6 @6 u& X6 pWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb' ~, _1 d8 a3 e' j
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.77" J1 `/ z0 t& T7 e
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? - Y6 K5 @8 E% Z/ e1 q) n! Q0 r1 q
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' }' d5 I! }, ?9 n$ G* kWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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