返回列表 回復 發帖

A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
% C. ?) K* \3 `2 [, m5.39.217.77
0 `9 ?+ ]  {' ]5.39.217.77
& u1 k: s! u  Z! s" ^/ O公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
0 ], B! T1 |/ o! _9 J& i5.39.217.77, E8 J7 Z, D( U

+ L. _; ?& H* a" _" b公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb+ w1 R( i5 c6 h( s

) g7 Q( p/ B1 Q9 W, k; T$ N3 m5.39.217.77
9 q' W% u) r# @& c1 {! O( t* P% Z$ |TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
, q6 U8 J& `8 `- e# Q$ g2 f; b公仔箱論壇TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。% ~8 G; r9 r1 H$ G$ J, d6 @
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb' p' c+ [6 M. J
If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 d' {' j  Z% h! h

+ n1 k. E0 p" x8 {, o7 U5.39.217.772 ]% L2 t. G$ w2 ^. w4 \
What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。* q7 x' Y& K7 q" r/ |* m: }$ v
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb/ x, L  M& W/ r/ |" s' W
5.39.217.77& Y8 B- R' N2 V4 C3 o& c; ^
And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
3 b+ k. [- H9 S1 v+ @" h公仔箱論壇公仔箱論壇# j: y* F4 O$ r8 L) P) Y: {& H
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 N  v& J2 o5 E) U1 L* b
If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。0 i6 O  ?( |) @" Q/ _" }

1 R6 a6 \' ?( n* I% B7 d* j4 }, s
If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
9 O! C' o7 y5 W6 q5 O6 W5.39.217.77
4 d- K6 c8 [3 L9 ]$ Ptvb now,tvbnow,bttvbtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb, y7 w" ~% o; T1 W! @9 X
Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
: S$ E4 s2 k# p* c" T  cTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。
2 m6 [- P) c# C7 X0 X
8 r& l$ Z+ \; Y3 X5.39.217.77Ray of Light
3 H7 ~1 @' Q; r( Z/ ]# s4 o5 y, H

RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.77; J1 y" g) m. K1 e, p

$ G5 O0 l! |- \: x
& m  }9 H# _5 X9 P/ }: Z公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77& `# d; [9 g; _5 Z* \
公仔箱論壇& o. w( Z2 z# L  A
9 B; l2 d1 ]- s; k+ M$ k9 W+ k
Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb2 W) w7 R, }  [6 K/ @+ h* L
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5 M2 G( Y+ P7 B, r/ B. W4 H1 m; T

2 W/ C8 B: E0 Y2 q+ {% bIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb2 Z7 z) U  `* O& w2 c5 \8 t
7 T/ }$ H2 T7 Y% ?& v

) @2 W8 O7 o$ r8 u7 _: g. e& ^tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。% L% P  L- {, Y

0 ^. y+ }% U( L9 w% ]! v, t2 K- @8 R8 e; I. ^7 V- I% B
What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
, }: n3 ^0 S1 ATVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。9 e, s: p- {- A1 L

6 I( R- B. U- ~/ g' wAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
! s0 r" d4 n0 C4 t5 K# w6 ~% b* A" B5.39.217.77TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 n# Z( T2 E) V' y1 N8 Y6 h5 i

& s1 s( w" g* [If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。( ^: s  r/ o: P# p7 I

+ x* @" Y- X* Q9 Y5.39.217.77
0 J* L0 s- d/ x0 _8 ^& }  [tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb. {$ M1 E/ A+ c& r& b7 Q7 L/ H  P

; T7 i- t" Y. g! `2 y* ftvb now,tvbnow,bttvb
% N1 Q! L3 a, X1 a' N7 C: S5 W5.39.217.77Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。$ N9 l% x& D; E" L. a& l. {3 V+ N9 {! R
5.39.217.77- h1 h  q9 d/ D  x& o" D' Z3 l( f
) a9 r' H" ^$ O# a
Ray of Light
返回列表