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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknownTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。: R8 M" Z$ m9 Z1 {

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul' t& u$ x6 k2 e! O, `: }
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.77/ M  Q5 P) w( |/ l  H. L
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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5 e" F7 @% V& {0 O! _What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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# H+ ?9 d$ E5 c# H7 ]0 ~; \) h# yIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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A Path Less Traveled
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3 e, |* o( g& U% X! [$ T# t公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown1 [/ Y/ _' e% Z

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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) ~" }+ D7 g$ W) `5 i公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇3 J) g  S* `9 y" `- {. q1 o, p9 @6 \

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, A5 d, Z; }$ d& Y! n, e, [If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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