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A Path Less Traveled
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; N" b3 p$ J1 Q5 RI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇" o/ p. D1 t5 y$ u3 K6 _

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you4 X* N: @7 a( f7 I7 d% g: l2 \

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# A* L# M* x6 M% j( R/ ?$ T* p公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.77+ u9 l* C) K( }! q+ b
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/ D3 X' W3 z. w4 ]& \/ ^% y  WIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.77  T/ u4 Q: t- N: k4 q+ K6 @7 K
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$ ^' r; Q4 j% a, D! T2 `& v. RChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul& a* k2 ^) N; O9 ?1 c- j

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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* L9 j, J: v$ @) \1 q* ]公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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