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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul3 M1 S6 A3 s6 z* u+ Z* e: w
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2 w5 w% B5 N7 S* D1 M5 MIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?4 y7 F$ y5 w" J7 i: s
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.77" A; i3 `( f, T1 H% {! v
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 5.39.217.773 v3 n+ Z' L$ A$ Z0 `1 K
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