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A Path Less Traveled
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% `" X& D" f5 e4 y& V: vI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown" D/ r& A; _) O1 N

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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& _. z: J; P9 e( k8 A( l4 [5.39.217.77If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?( b( ?7 V( ]  C% y; o/ v
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb) i4 y% C& L7 @3 S* N/ z' W& w
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" w% [' h* m( P/ oAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? / E* }& e( I8 ], w  I
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇! T6 |6 Z5 d& X! Z8 h: H
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb  ~2 \8 [3 A6 m' s3 Y8 ?. H) ~$ `

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...( c& S( I  ^& m/ ^  h$ \; c

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb. u$ g: S6 A7 X# K# j5 {! z( m
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇  k6 a4 V& [% F/ m# F+ N. `

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