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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇8 Z4 S1 w3 Z, A& d$ p

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8 t' K/ v- [. q; p( n6 e6 _Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb0 `7 m, {7 t) G( n7 l& t. r6 y2 ]

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you# m$ n$ ^4 \- i5 E! G" w2 s
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4 R4 {. ~( Q! EIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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7 ~3 Z0 r2 x3 HWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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( U2 M8 ~8 j0 T: xAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb, s$ R9 C; [7 a1 i* P
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( m: ^# E1 N& H1 j0 ftvb now,tvbnow,bttvbWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb- x5 i# p* ]/ [
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb. q& v6 E) v0 H1 ~& @& v" C

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...# v8 ]- s( ]  X" o, V

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?( i) m% L+ l5 i6 W: u8 V7 K

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