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A poem - 請多多指教

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9 @3 {! R8 f/ T  f6 ztvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul/ V3 i. @0 B$ B  ]

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..! D' i3 f" G! `' l
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% ]: T$ q4 i1 c! wAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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+ s: m( \6 O2 Z  a& q5 lTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb+ r" ?3 a& z2 f
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+ }, S7 I! D: Y% H! B: e6 ]% B, h: ~公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.7 k& t! {3 ~8 X5 T% g

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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less TraveledTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。( R* Z* G& N3 H1 C

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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$ W" _* D4 ~1 w# H* L公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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, \: {' R0 n5 n2 m# Z1 M7 g/ }If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?6 b( f: T$ F6 h) T5 N8 D+ s

8 p% c6 Q" N8 F* wTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。
7 m' P% H) d8 |/ x8 [! _TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇5 x* v* g  t# o4 ?! O& l# @' C) k: z

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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