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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown( a5 e7 P: [2 y! |1 G2 F( K

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.770 c, K  B0 ?' B( o
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?2 ~# n$ n; G( N- [

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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* @. Q: k- [; V1 S9 U公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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4 _, t7 G5 E9 p# y- \3 }tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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; w8 T, r6 U  F$ i* U, WI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇; B' x% X0 H% V

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; n3 }- K) I0 X6 a/ P. l5.39.217.77If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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+ x0 D3 e2 p% c- F& w公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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- V. L+ G# d. H8 O3 K# D! a5.39.217.77If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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. O( r# f9 i1 e9 e9 Z& \公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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