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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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0 c2 @; Q( x+ k# v# }Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.77  L! u/ L1 ?" o/ e9 Y
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。4 g/ A& \2 v) g; h4 B
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4 K3 P5 W& @- z9 \& y# u' o公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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rayoflight48

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發表於 2010-11-1 01:16 PM | 只看該作者 ::: 一按馬上把這個話題放上你的facebook!! :::

RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?1 j) J& X; r& x) F0 J1 O+ o: a
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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