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A poem - 請多多指教

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- K# Y1 w% p3 c  w; V0 \& D公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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) W( W) j4 }0 M8 }' f* }公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

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7 H1 t4 P. t# T. ~. ?. O9 ^I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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3 V0 E" ?5 h& Q' v2 l1 C% v公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。  \8 e* P# o$ b7 S, ^$ L

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3 D: m' d$ f- ~公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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